Trust Breaks
by Sharmila Uday Shankar
Once in a village named sarjapur there lived a man called kasi,he was an villager and he had 2 sons naresh and kumaran,they both were not educated and they lost their mother at the age of 5, they both were twins and they were working in field and were living happily with their father kasi. one night kasi had a dream of his wife sulekha where she said get our sons married soon, after waking up kasi feels yeah my wife was right I must get my sons married as they have crossed 25 and he approaches to velingiri his relative, velingiri has 3 daughters sumitha,latha and anitha.velingiri is an farmer but he has educated his daughters till 10th std,kasi asks whether he is interested in sending his 2 daughters to kasi house as brides,velingiri agrees for that and they fix engagement and marriage date and get them married. After 1 year latha and anitha bore childrens and lived happily, latha has 1 daughter poonam and anitha also has an daughter anamika, they both complete their under graduation and for higher degree they want to go to abroad,so their parents believe that they might choose wrong way so they get them engaged to their known peoples son’s nirag and abhishek, after their studies they fix their marriage and their parents peacefully send them abroad, after reaching there anamika and poonam enjoy more and anamika gets an proposal from jagdish, he likes her in first sight and anamika also gets attracted to him as he was the smart and handsome guy in the whole college and accepts him, poonam asks her hey why di??you know that we are engaged according to our parents choice…anamika replies yeah but what to do?? I am in love with him as he is smart but poonam explains her don’t want but anamika never understands her and she starts going out with him and once anamika gets a call from jagdish friend shyam by saying that jagdish met with an accident so please you come soon to see him for the last time so after hearing this anamika runs with loaded tears on her eyes after she reaches their she could see no one there after 2 minutes jagdish comes from back and closes her eyes and hugs her tightly and she asks him hey your friend told me that you met with an accident then how come you are like this, he says just to invite you to my house that was our plan and all my friends are here and they play with her life and lastly she asks him you scounderel you didn’t love me is it??he replies no not at all I liked your beauty and I never thought you as my wife and now I cant marry you sorry baby search some good guy take care….and poonam hangs herself … Moral : never trust anyone Click here to read or post comments.
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